关于Personal Statement
想申请某学校,在Personal Statement 中对自己的描述是,……I always try to obtain any opportunity to widen my horizon, deepen my knowledge and improve my work skills too, dreaming to be a “superman” one day.那个“superman”被GG砍掉了,他说俺这样写真是让他头大，..估计老师看到这个也会被俺吓跑了..
大家说说看老师会不会被吓跑呢。唉，现在的人越来越胆小了都？:$ I would suggest you to more Personalized your goal since the Admin. would like to see/know how you are real is. "Supperman" seems more like a concept than a real person. Since there is too much "gun-shotting" in campus in these several years, I think your GG is right.
Good luck
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